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This has been an rough week because many different things are happen i think this is an bad sem. for me. It like no matter how hard i try someting alway go wrong. It like i can't win for losing, i'm stating to think i have bad luck but don't know why i'm not an bad person or any thing. I just hope that when the fall sem come it get better.

This has been an rough week because many different things are happen i think this is an bad sem. for me. It like no matter how hard i try someting alway go wrong. It like i can't win for losing, i'm stating to think i have bad luck but don't know why i'm not an bad person or any thing. I just hope that when the fall sem come it get better.

where i at in my argument essay is having to chose another bill because i didn't follow the correct way so know i staring over. Which put me in find another bill which is should the U.S proved public benefits to people who was affected by 9/11 terrorist attack , and i was for it.And now i have to research this one and brain storm on it. Then put it into paragraph from.

In my essay I think the strongest part was my position on the bill. Although I feel that my examples were sufficient I think that maybe I should have look for different examples. Over all I am satisfies with the final draft of my essay. At first my position was in favor of the bill but as i researched and look though other opinion i realized i did not fully agree. My essay includes a personal experience and I also use Kean University and TCNJ in my essay. I found those examples good because i know people that have used the resources offered by the schools. 

Today was a great day but to bad for me i had to work all day. Now i trying my best to look over my essay before summiting it. I hate working doing the weekend because i never have time to get all my school work done, this is a perfect example of how this job is getting in the way of my school. At this point all i can do is hope that i pass all my finials coming up. however, this might be the last blog I'm getting a grade for but it wont be the last one i write....

    In my bill final draft I think it might be a little better then all my other drafts since this semester.  But I might could have did a little better working on the drafts.  Good thing writing this bill is all over.  I hope the points that I gave are understandable.  Also, I hope the reader understand where I am coming from writing in the draft.  This assignment was not to bad to do, it took almost the whole month that was good though.  In my draft I tried to give good points that students and teachers understand what I am trying to say. So, all I have to wait for are the grade for the assignment and I might will let yall know what's going on.

             Well this is my last blog i will have to do this semester.  I think this will be my last blog ever.  Today was so beautiful outside it hit 80 degrees.  In this weather i decided to wash my car because it was so dirty.  It was not that bad i think it took me like an hour.  After i came home from history class i started finishing up my argument paper im still working oon it i will make deadline  though.  I hope everyone has a safe and happy summer and try to relax if you are not taking summer classes.  Tommorow i will be going to my sisters basketball game (hope they win).  Well thats all i have to say so long vox.

I just finished up my  polished draft for the argument essay, i think i did an ok job knowing that its going to be better when i do my final draft for the portfolio. Well this is probally going to be my last blog of the year and i am happy its finaly going to be over because these blogs were getting old becuase their was really nothing else to right about i was running out of ideas an getting a little bored writing them but i guess it was a good experiance.

for what i'm doing now, is writting a "polished draft"  about my argument on a bill that is suppose to help me with to develope a sense on what issues i shouold argue about and how to go about doing it . my nexty step is that io still have to do other piece of writing that i don't really know yet but i'm sure that its going to take all the time i need . then i am to continue on working on my portfolio for my class  grade. hopefully i will show that being in this class was not a waste.

My how time flies when you're having fun.  I have been working hard all semester to meet the requirements of my major, achieve my goals, and of course post these blogs.  As you may know I have been writing these blogs for my English class.  However, this week's posts may be the last posts that I create.  My how time flies, I don't think that I will cancel my account, but I may occasionally post a blog or two to promote Music Concerts and such.  My how time flies as I practice and prepare for numerous final exams, practicals (playing exams), and juries.  My how time flies for I must adjourn now.  Until we meet again...

                          Super Nerd :)